Comments on: કદીક https://vmtailor.com/archives/90 એક નવી રચના, મહિનાના દર પહેલા અને ત્રીજા શનિવારે... Wed, 08 Feb 2012 08:37:18 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: Rina https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-176870 Wed, 08 Feb 2012 08:37:18 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-176870 વા….હ….awesome

]]> By: Surati vishal https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-20335 Sat, 06 Dec 2008 12:33:29 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-20335 ડાળ વાસંતી ક્ષણોની રાહમાં,
પાનખર પણ પર્ણને પરણે કદીક.

ઉપરનો શે’ર ગમ્યો તમે ખુબ આગળ વઘો

]]> By: Anonymous https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-644 Fri, 10 Nov 2006 10:45:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-644 ડાળ વાસંતી ક્ષણોની રાહમાં,
પાનખર પણ પર્ણને પરણે કદીક
beautiful thought!!!
ichha to sau koine hoi to pachhi pankhar ni iccha pan tamara vicharo ane sabdo maa kandaraya vagar ni kevi rite rahi jai!!!!

]]> By: sana https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-643 Wed, 08 Nov 2006 05:00:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-643 1st two lines are very good.”..
..Shabd pan haqq jatave ano…”

]]> By: Anonymous https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-642 Sat, 04 Nov 2006 21:50:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-642 wah wah ……….bahu oocha doctor manas hoye che…..
manas hovano tamne malyo che khitaab,have to rakho panu khullu jeendgi bani che kitab….
Laage raho vivekbhai…..

]]> By: Anonymous https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-641 Sat, 04 Nov 2006 16:09:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-641 મારા ઘરના ટહુકામાં ઊઘાડ આવે છે

જીવનમાં તું હોય જો સાથ કદીક

મીના

]]> By: vijay shah https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-640 Sat, 04 Nov 2006 06:58:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-640 શબ્દ પણ હડતાળ પર ઉતરે કદીક,
હક્ક એનો એ જતાવે છે કદીક.

તું મળે ત્યાં જીભ ચોંટે તાળવે,
આ અવાચક્તા ય તો બોલે કદીક.

Excellant!

]]> By: Anonymous https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-639 Sat, 04 Nov 2006 04:25:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-639 Saheb,
You very well to capture the finest things in terms of words and snapshots too…
sabdo ne hadtaal par utari ne pan ghanu badhu kahi javo chho!!!!

શબ્દ પણ હડતાળ પર ઉતરે કદીક,
હક્ક એનો એ જતાવે છે કદીક.

તું મળે ત્યાં જીભ ચોંટે તાળવે,
આ અવાચક્તા ય તો બોલે કદીક.

ડાળ વાસંતી ક્ષણોની રાહમાં,
પાનખર પણ પર્ણને પરણે કદીક.

]]> By: Anonymous https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-638 Fri, 03 Nov 2006 08:42:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-638 WAH DOCTOR WAH…

GANAMA MANSO DOCTOR HOI CHHE…..

….PAN BAHU OCHHA DOCTOR MANAS HOI CHHE….

KEEP IT UP

Anand kamdar
New Jersey

]]> By: Tej World https://vmtailor.com/archives/90/comment-page-1#comment-637 Fri, 03 Nov 2006 06:36:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/90#comment-637 u have such a good command on words…..

gazals r very touchy……

can u help me ….????
hw u have written in gujarati….???
i can do that….
i tried a lot….

have nice time and keep updating ur blog…..

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