Comments on: રેતી https://vmtailor.com/archives/9 એક નવી રચના, મહિનાના દર પહેલા અને ત્રીજા શનિવારે... Sun, 18 Mar 2012 05:02:26 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: રેતી · શબ્દો છે શ્વાસ મારા https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-177998 Sun, 18 Mar 2012 05:02:26 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-177998 […] આ ગઝલ અગાઉ આ બ્લૉગ પર પ્રકાશિત થઈ ચૂકી છે. એ વખતે […]

]]> By: મીના છેડા https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-174226 Thu, 24 Nov 2011 06:34:58 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-174226 છે સંબંધ કાંઠા ની માટી સમા સૌ,
ઉડે જો જરી ભેજ, થઈ જાય રેતી.
વાહ!

]]> By: nehal https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-171751 Wed, 14 Sep 2011 17:01:24 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-171751 વાહ!ઉસ્તાદ..વાહ!

]]> By: Chetna Bhatt https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-171579 Sat, 10 Sep 2011 13:59:50 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-171579 પ્રણય ની વિમાસણ, છે કહેવું ઘણું પણ,
તું સામે હો, પગ થી સરી જાય રેતી.

Superb…!!

]]> By: મીના છેડા https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-171405 Tue, 06 Sep 2011 14:04:48 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-171405 તમે સાથ છોડો, રહે શું જીવન માં?
આ ઘડિયાળ માં બસ, સર્યે જાય રેતી.

ક્યા બાત!!!

]]> By: rekha joshi https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-24762 Sat, 27 Dec 2008 06:22:53 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-24762 છે સબંધ કાંઠા ની……………..બે પંક્તી બહુ સરસ છે.

]]> By: Rajesh https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-2040 Thu, 30 Aug 2007 09:09:11 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-2040 પ્રણય ની વિમાસણ, છે કહેવું ઘણું પણ,
તું સામે હો, પગ થી સરી જાય રેતી.

really Doctor, here I would like to ask you one question. are you really a doctor? after reading your lovely poems, no one can say that you may be a doctor by profession. All your poems are really amazing. hatz of you.

]]> By: Anonymous https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-8 Tue, 03 Jan 2006 00:19:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-8 dilne sparshi jaay evi rachna…

“Chhe sambandho kathani mati sama sau, ude jo jari bhej thai jaay reti…”

]]> By: radhika https://vmtailor.com/archives/9/comment-page-1#comment-7 Sun, 01 Jan 2006 17:19:00 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/archives/9#comment-7 Namste vivekbhai
fari ek tabib no kavita-shabdo sathe no lagav mani rahichhu.mane lage chhe k docters jivan ane mrutune atyant nikatthi nihade chhe etle e kudaratni aatli najik hase.etle j kadach emnama aasamvednao jivti hashe..jem tame anbhuvo chho…
khub sundar rachna chhe…

“gaya tara sparshna unto pachhithi
hathedi thi dil ma gari jay reti”

vanchya pachhi amstu j kaik sfuru e lakhvani gustakhi karu chhu

“jarjarit thai sambandh ni imarat have, smaran pan padghay to khari jay reti__.

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