Comments on: શ્વાસોના ટાંકણાથી…

By: Rina

Rina — Fri, 06 Apr 2012 12:38:51 +0000

આખું જીવન આ મારું જીવાયું એ રીતે,બસ-
મારે જવું હતું ક્યાં ને ક્યાં જઈ ચડાયું?

પાંખો કપાયેલી લઈ સરતા આ શ્વાસ સામે,
હર ક્ષણ ઝઝૂમવાનું, હર કોઈ છે જટાયુ.
Awesome

By: dhaval Navaneet

dhaval Navaneet — Sat, 26 Apr 2008 19:45:07 +0000

Vivekbhai,
apnu agman amaro swash chhe .have nahi lo vidai tevo vishwash chhe.
apani rachana o no ashwad chhe atale baki jindgi ni zanzavat no kya koi avkash chhe.

khub khub abhar

By: rahul

rahul — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 13:31:02 +0000

hi i am rahul

By: ANITA

ANITA — Sun, 15 Jul 2007 12:26:50 +0000

બસ આમ જ ચાલતા રહો..

By: Madhubhai Kapadia

Madhubhai Kapadia — Thu, 12 Jul 2007 04:40:15 +0000

You might not have heard such a Negative comment but it contains deep positivenes.
“BHAYANKAR SUNDAR GAZAL’

By: Hozefa Dahod

Hozefa Dahod — Wed, 11 Jul 2007 08:56:26 +0000

A wonderful & as well a shocking experince, wonderful becoz, we cant describe the beauty of this gazal in wrds, i just got stood & fell into depth of the poem, Shocking Becoz of the writer name , the Person whom i used to meet in a different manner ( I As Medical Rep & He As a Doctor), have one another part of his life , on one hand helping in saving life of a person, on other hand such an immense writer, who plays with word very well ,
Excellent Sir…….!
Keep continue wid more ……………!

By: Mukesh

Mukesh — Wed, 11 Jul 2007 06:45:08 +0000

શ્વાસોના ટાંકણાથી ભીતર ના ખોતરાયું,
રહી રહીને પાછા ફરવું એથી સિરે લખાયું.

મારું જ મારી સાથે વર્તન છે ઓરમાયું-
આ આટલા વરસમાં ખુદને ન ઓળખાયું ?

Very Nice…….

By: Harish Dave

Harish Dave — Wed, 11 Jul 2007 05:22:14 +0000

No one can be away … You will continue your journey that never ends. Your pen will never stop. …. Harish Dave Ahmedabad

By: Anita Navadiya

Anita Navadiya — Wed, 11 Jul 2007 04:38:11 +0000

Nice……………….words are close to heart

By: Narendra Chauahan

Narendra Chauahan — Wed, 11 Jul 2007 04:05:32 +0000

Dear Vivekbhai,
kem chho?
…ghanaa diwaso pachhee ghazalo no aaswaad karaavyo! as usual the ghazal is up to the mark which makes us to read again and understand what you try to say!it will take time!

i like the quotation (from someone), “”your absence should be long enough so that somebody misses you…. but it should not be long that someone learns to live without you…”. truly well said, who ever has said!!

silsilO chaalu rakhjO1
…aavjO!
..sasneh,
..Narendra