Comments on: અંધારપટ https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310 એક નવી રચના, મહિનાના દર પહેલા અને ત્રીજા શનિવારે... Sat, 14 Jan 2012 16:58:58 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: kokila https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-176082 Sat, 14 Jan 2012 16:58:58 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-176082 excellent poem .liked it

]]> By: sanju vala https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175394 Mon, 26 Dec 2011 04:47:03 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175394 હા, આ એક જુદા પ્રકારે તમારી કાવ્યનિર્મિતિ. મુસલસલ ?

]]> By: RAJESHRI https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175390 Mon, 26 Dec 2011 01:13:42 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175390 ખુબ સરસ

]]> By: Dinesh Pandya https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175316 Sat, 24 Dec 2011 05:25:21 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175316 અંધારપટ, ગીતકાવ્ય, તસ્વીરો – ભરબપોરે અંધારું – બાકોરું બધું જ સુંદર, અતી સુંદર સમન્વય –
તમે જાણે અંધારાના સૌંદર્યની આરતી ઉતારી. તમને ખૂબ ખૂબ અભિનંદન!

દિનેશ પંડ્યા

]]> By: jalal mastan jalal https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175292 Fri, 23 Dec 2011 07:30:06 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175292 “motiya ni den chhe ke deekra mota thaya?
dheeme-dheeme aankh saame aavto andhaarpat…..!”

Waaaaaah…..
aa rajooaat gami.
great. ghanu badhu chhe aa sher ma. waaaah……
abhinandan.
-kavi jalal mastan jalal.
(Ahmedabad)

]]> By: Sandip https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175269 Thu, 22 Dec 2011 14:20:12 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175269 હાથવેંત જ હોય એ પણ હાથમાં આવે નહીં,
ક્ષણનો પાલવ યુગ સુધી વિસ્તારતો અંધારપટ.

વાહ…!

]]> By: urvi https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175264 Thu, 22 Dec 2011 11:08:53 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175264 awesome

]]> By: Pancham Shukla https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175263 Thu, 22 Dec 2011 11:04:01 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175263 સરસ ગઝલ. બધા જ શેર મનનીય છે. ચિંતન અને શેરિયતથી તસોતસ શેરને લીધે આ ગઝલ ભાવકને બરાબર જકડે છે.

]]> By: KIRAN PANDYA https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175260 Thu, 22 Dec 2011 10:26:16 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175260 NICELY WORDED POEM.CONGRETS.KJP

]]> By: manvant patel https://vmtailor.com/archives/1310/comment-page-1#comment-175258 Thu, 22 Dec 2011 09:38:19 +0000 http://vmtailor.com/?p=1310#comment-175258 જ્aય્a હ્ોo

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